You read it all the time. Whether it is in a press release or a proposal. It is usually in the first sentence or if not, it is definitely in the first paragraph. It doesn’t matter what company or what industry. It is always there. It may take a variety of forms yet it is meant to convey the same meaning.
Do you know what it is?
“Acme Company, a leading supplier in to the widget-making industry“
XYZ Company, the premier manufacturer of unobtainium”
“Engulf & Devour, a leader in technology solutions”
These are all stupid things to say. What is a prospect or a reader supposed to make of these? The problem with statements like these is that they are difficult to define or verify. They sound great, and I’m sure some marketing person is very proud for having thought of it – which I believe happened somewhere in the early Paleolithic Era and everyone else has simply copied and pasted the phrase since then.
Why not make statements that are fact-based and quantifiable?
“HyperDisk Marketing, providing technology and marketing innovation for nearly 20 years.”
HyperDisk, launched its first hospitality website in 1993; was a pioneer in Email Registration Systems (ERS); a leader in 3-D Immersive Website technology (1994); and first integrated micro-formats and Geo-tagging into a website in 2007.
Do you want to work with a company that uses a well-worn phrase stating their “leadership” or a company with an easy-to-prove track record of being a leader?
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